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鈥淐UT!鈥?Jason, the director cried.

15 year old Lily Evans and her two co-stars, Lila Trace and Dan Borski, sighed.

When Lily had got the main role in the new movie, Lookout, seven months ago, she would have never have dreamed it would be this hard. If she did no more than blink at the wrong time, this was no doubt that Jason would notice and make them start over.

鈥淕uys,鈥?Jason said in a disappointed tone, 鈥淲hen people buy tickets to see my movie, they are expecting it seem real, not like a bunch of kids acting it out poorly. Start from the top, and please make it good this time.

Lily, Dan and Lila exchanged a three-way eye roll before starting the scene over鈥?again.

鈥淎aaaaaand ACTION!鈥?

鈥淢arie, I鈥檓 sorry.鈥?Dan acted. 鈥淛ust listen to me-鈥?br>

鈥淣o!鈥?Lily screamed, forcing tears down her cheeks. 鈥淵ou have no idea how much you hurt me! Just- Just leave me alone.鈥?br>

She waited for the end of Lila鈥檚 line, for that was her cue to walk off set, but it never came.

鈥淢ike,鈥?she started, pretending to tell off Dan 鈥淵ou are such a-鈥?

Lila broke into a fit of giggles.

鈥淚鈥檓 sorry, I鈥檓 sorry,鈥?she apologized to Jason, trying not to laugh, 鈥淚t鈥檚 just-鈥?br>

Making it even worse, Lily and Dan started cracking up because of Lila鈥檚 sudden burst of giggles and the raged look on Jason鈥檚 face.

鈥淓NOUGH!鈥?Jason screamed over the laughter, 鈥淓veryone take 5.鈥?br>

Jason looked at the three stars still laughing uncontrollably and rephrased his statement.

鈥淢ake that 10.鈥?He sighed cradling his head in his hands.

Wiping there eyes, Lily, Dan, and Lila walk over to the food cart.

鈥淭hat was so funny.鈥?Lily giggled, grabbing a handful of skittles. 鈥淒id you see Jason鈥檚 face?鈥?br>

鈥淚 know,鈥?Lila laughed back. 鈥淗e has absolutely no sense of humor whatsoever.鈥?

鈥淏ut that鈥檚 why it鈥檚 so fun to get him mad,鈥?Dan agreed, taking a swig of Dr. Pepper, 鈥淩emember that time when we put a whoopee cushion on his director鈥檚 chair?鈥?

Lily laughed at the memory.

鈥淵eah, he was so mad, his face was priceless.鈥?Lila smiled, 鈥淕ood thing he never realized it was us.鈥?br>

鈥淛ust think about what he鈥檇 do if he did find out,鈥?Lily Pondered.

The three shuddered at the thought.

鈥淗ey,鈥?Dan said to Lily and Lila, 鈥淟ets go somewhere after work.鈥?br>

鈥淵eah like鈥hili鈥檚 or something?鈥?Lila suggested.

鈥淚f we survived,鈥?Lily rolled her eyes, as Jason yelled for them to get on set.

Dan smiled.

She looked into his baby blue eyes. Every time Lily did she found a scene of two people together. The girl had curly red and bright green eyes as Lily did. Like Dan, the tall boy had jet black hair and blue eyes. This time, the girl was being given a piggyback by the boy, in a calm and serene field of flowers. The girl was laughing as she was put down by the boy. She seemed so carefree, happy and safe as the boy put his hands with hers. He tucked her hair behind her ear. There lips meet. Lily smiled.

鈥淯h, Lily?鈥?Dan laughed as he waved his hands in front of her face, 鈥淎re you there?鈥?br>

She was suddenly thrown out of the field of flowers and into the studio.

鈥淥h sorry, just thinking,鈥?Lily鈥檚 face grew hot as she twisted her ____ ring as an excuse not to look up. How long had she been standing there with that blank, goofy grin on her face? That was what the problem about staring at Dan鈥檚 eyes. They filled her with a warm feeling as she did, but after, she ended up feeling like an idiot. But they were so tempting to look at鈥?

鈥淲rong. You where doing something, but you defiantly weren鈥檛 thinking.鈥?he said imitating her face, putting on a dumb grin, and Lila laughed.

She winced. Had she really looked that stupid?

鈥淪hut up.鈥?Lily said half annoyed-half amused. Dan had a way with words. As a result, things that he did or said wouldn鈥檛 have been as funny if someone else had.

鈥淎nyway,鈥?he said changing subjects, 鈥淕uys, meet me at my car at around 6. Don鈥檛 worry you鈥檒l have plenty of time to do you hair, Lila,鈥?he added.

Lily laughed, because everyone who knew Lila, knew she took forever to do her hair. For Lily, it took about 5 minutes and Lila didn鈥檛 know how she did it.

鈥淏ut I don鈥檛 understand how it looks so good! You don鈥檛 do anything with it!鈥?she always said after they got out of the dressing room after work.

鈥淲ell anyway,鈥?Dan said, 鈥淟et鈥檚 get going, before Jason kills us.鈥?br>

鈥淥ne sec,鈥?Lila said, 鈥淵ou go. I need to ask Lily something.鈥?br>

Once Dan was out of sight, Lila said in a sing-song voice, 鈥淟ooks like someone has a crush on Dan Borski!鈥?

鈥淚 do not!鈥?Lily lied, hoping she sound convincing, 鈥淗e鈥檚 just a friend. You know that.鈥?br>

鈥淥kaaaayy鈥?Lila said once again in her sing-song voice, obviously not believing her.

They walked over to the set, and Lily couldn鈥檛 help but to think of her conversation with Lila.

鈥淟ooks like someone has a crush on Dan Borski!鈥?

鈥淚 do not!鈥?

But that wasn鈥檛 the truth. Not even close.

Dan and Lily stood by Dan鈥檚 car at exactly 6:00, waiting for Lila.

鈥淲ell, this is strange, Lila鈥檚 late!鈥?Lily said sarcastically checking her watch, 鈥淭his isn鈥檛 like her at all.鈥?

This was a joke of course; Lila was always late, for everything.

Dan laughed. 鈥淵eah probably working on her hair, as I predicted.鈥?br>

The conversation became awkward after that. Lily, who usually had a lot to say, kept quiet.

鈥淲hat if I say something, and he thinks I鈥檓 weird?鈥?Lily thought frightfully to herself.

Half of Lily knew that that would never happen. Dan just wasn鈥檛 that kind of person. But her other half told her to be cautious. That part overpowered the other.

鈥淥h look, there鈥檚 Lila.鈥?Said Lily, relieved.

鈥淪orry I鈥檓 late guys,鈥?said Lila running over, 鈥淚 was just-鈥?

鈥淔ixing your hair?鈥?Lily finished, innocently.

Dan laughed.

鈥淗a. Ha. You鈥檙e funny,鈥?Lila said opening the car door.

鈥淚 know,鈥?Lily said getting in the front seat with Dan, 鈥淲hat can I say?鈥?

Lily Turned on the radio and Me Love By: Sean Kingston filled the car with sound.

鈥淥h, my favorite song!鈥?said Lila and Dan at the same time. Although, Lila sounded genuine and Dan鈥檚 words were dripping with sarcasm. Lily laughed.

Rolling down the window, Lily let the sun-kissed air hit her face and started singing.

鈥淥h, oh, oh, oh, oh, ohhh, why鈥檇 you have to go-oo away from hoooome, Me love.鈥?

Lila joined in the next verse swaying her hands in the air. All Dan did was roll his eyes.

鈥淐ome on guys,鈥?Dan begged, 鈥淵ou鈥檙e embarrassing me!鈥?br>

鈥淵ou? Embarrassed?鈥?Lila snorted, 鈥淪ure!鈥?br>

Lily laughed too. He never got embarrassed. One time the two girls dared him to sit on the bench at the park where a couple was sitting. Not only did he do that, but he added a 鈥淐an you scoot over? I鈥檓 squished!鈥?Out of all the traits of Dan she admired, she probably admired his 鈥楴othing can embarrass me!鈥?attitude the most. This was probably because that skill was something she didn鈥檛 have. Whenever someone came over and gave her a compliment, she would blush ferociously.

鈥淐ome on! Sing along!鈥?Lily teased Dan, slapping him playfully.

鈥淯h, no thanks,鈥?Dan said punching her arm lightly. Lily felt a shock go up her arm and into her heart, when his skin touched hers.

When they got to Chili鈥檚 heads turned, people whispered. As much as Lily hated it, she just smiled at them politely, mostly to hide her annoyed face. This happened all the time, and Lily had learned how to ignore it. But really, she was just a person going to dinner with some friends. Not an exhibit at the zoo.

鈥淭able for three?鈥?asked the waitress. They all smiled and nodded. Lily was glad she was treating them like normal people- instead of pleading for an autograph.

鈥淗ere you go,鈥?said the waitress pointing at the table, and the three sat down.

Even though Lily had never talked to the waitress in her life, she could tell she was a nice person. A person that didn鈥檛 care about what a person was on the outside, but on the inside.

鈥淪o,鈥?Lila started, 鈥淪urprisingly enough, I wasn鈥檛 late because I was working on my hair, I was on my cell. And you鈥檒l never guess who called!鈥?br>

鈥淲ho?鈥?Lily and Dan said together.

鈥淐ody Lanoka!鈥?she squealed.

鈥淥hmygod! Why?鈥?Lily squealed back.

Cody Lanoka, was one of the 鈥榟eart-throbs鈥?listed in Teen-People magazine. He listed number 5, and boy, was he hot.

鈥淲ell,鈥?she said leaning towards Dan and Lily, 鈥淗e鈥檚 throwing a party on next Saturday and鈥? He wants us to come! From what others have heard, it鈥檚 going to be the hottest party of the year.鈥?br>

The two girls squealed.

鈥淲hy didn鈥檛 you tell me this before?鈥?Lily giggled.

鈥淚 just need the right time to say it,鈥?Lila answered, 鈥淧lus with that hair comment, I thought you deserved it.鈥?

Lily laughed and the waitress handed them their food.

鈥淲here is it?鈥?Dan asked.

鈥淥h, I鈥檓 not sure yet, but he said you needed at date, or you can鈥檛 come.鈥?Lila sighed, 鈥淭hat will stink if I can鈥檛 find one.鈥?br>

Lily sighed too. She was sort of 鈥榖oy shy鈥? She barely talked to guys, let alone ask one on a date! She looked over at Dan. Anyway, the one guy she would even think of asking would say no. He wasn鈥檛 interested in her.