My book the kidnappe?

There once was a town called Shellymin it was a very peaceful place, everyone knew each other, they were all friends. It was a little island, most people would go there for a holiday even though others stayed there for a lifetime. You had to go on a ferry to get to the island, it costed $5 per person but if you were a homeowner it would only cost $2. The trees were very good to climb on and that鈥檚 why all the children loved the tree鈥檚 there. There was also a huge lake that you were aloud to swim in but you couldn鈥檛 go past the poles that were in the water because that鈥檚 where the fish swam. All the houses stood in a row like soldiers, and every house that was built was to be made out of wood because the man who owned this island loved houses made out of wood, you also couldn鈥檛 paint them, but if you had permission you could.

In this little island there lived a rich family, this family was called the Charlson family. Steve Charlson was in the company that worked for the island and he had a wife and four children. He had light brown hair and eyes the colour of the sea. His wife, Alice was a Nurse at the Shellymin鈥檚 Children鈥檚 Hospital and was thin and beautiful with her long golden hair and bright blue eyes. Their eldest child was Jake Charlson, who was seventeen and nearly going to collage to train to become a teacher. With his good looks and his sweet and sensitive personality he got him self a girlfriend . Next in child birth was Jessica Charlson or you might say Jess, as she was known to be called, she had long brown hair, a few freckles and bright blue eyes the colour of her mum鈥檚, she was pretty, bright and was 13. After Jess came Maxwell Charlson but he preferred to be called Max, Max was a bully at school and had very little friends, he was 11, stubborn and had shaggy, muddy brown hair and a gloomy face. The very youngest of the children was Caroline Charlson, the 4 year old, cute little angel, at least that鈥檚 what her parents thought of her, the true Caroline was a clever, tough, out going little rascal, she was cute with her puppy dog eyes and curly blonde hair on the outside but the real her was on the inside.

Then there was there house that was very beautiful, it had a balcony outside every room and it was a 3-storie mansion that looked over the lake, it was LOVELY! Each room had a safe in it just incase they would have a brake-in. In Jesse鈥檚 safe there was her money her jewelry and her rare CD鈥檚. In Jake鈥檚 safe there was a book called 鈥淗ow To Be A Teacher鈥?there was also a trophy from the Spelling Bee contest when he was 7. In Max鈥檚 safe there was an invitation to the bad boys gang party and a card that said: you are now an official bad boy gangster, and a CD signed by the country鈥檚 best rapper. Then last is Caroline she had a karate medal and karate clothes from her secret lessons, and a medal from the beauty contest she won when she was 3 and her first lost tooth from a few weeks ago. In the living room they had a flat Plasma screen TV in front of their couch and a coffee table just beside it, they also had all around sound to make the TV sound realistic. In the Kitchen they had a glass table, some cupboards and lots of top class electronics. In Jake鈥檚 bedroom, he had a bed, a desk with a 24 inch screen Macintosh computer on it, a TV and a walk in wardrobe. In Jess鈥檚 room she had a mirror, some posters of Avril Lavigne and Brad Pit, she had a bunk bed with a desk underneath instead of a bed and a 30 inch TV. In Max鈥檚 room there was a rock 鈥榥鈥?roll guitar tickets to a concert that鈥檚 called: 鈥榬ocking my life鈥?CD鈥檚 for beginner rockers. Also a Compaq laptop and a rockstar book. His bed was a big one that had a black blanket and in big white letters it said this: ROCKSTAR! He also had a white plain pillow. On the wall there was posters of famous rocker鈥檚. In Caroline鈥檚 room there was a little bed on the wall there was a painting off a mermaid sitting on a rock then in the corner was a little table with a mirror on it and some 鈥榣earning to read鈥?books and the carpet was a little pink and red stripes carpet then in the mum and dad鈥檚 room there was a king sized bed a mirror on each side of the bed there was a bedside table and then there was a door that led to the bathroom. There was also a indoor pool with lots of toys.

The charltons鈥檚 also had a trampoline that floats on the water. Upstairs was a play room with playmobile Lego action figures mini go-karts a little race track and two mote-control cars then there was a spare room for guest鈥檚 and a cupboard where all the mum and dad鈥檚 trophies and medals. 鈥淚鈥檓 going to the pub you look after the kids ok?鈥?Said Steve as he went out the door.

鈥淥k, darling.鈥?She said as he closed the door behind him.

When he got to the pub he said 鈥淗i Moe, give me a beer or two.鈥?In 25 minutes Steve had drunken 12 cups of beers and a bottle of wine. Not surprisingly Steve got drunk, he was so drunk he couldn鈥檛 drive the way home and had to take a taxi.

鈥淗i honey, I鈥檓 home!鈥?Steve said as he walked into the room with a slam behind him as he closed the door.

鈥淪hh, don鈥檛 wake up the kids!鈥?Alice whispered. 鈥漌hat took you so long, Steve?鈥?br> 鈥淯m, uh, can I lie down for a second?鈥?br> 鈥淥h no, don鈥檛 say you got drunk again! How many beers did you have?鈥?br> 鈥淛ust 12.鈥?br> 鈥淛ust 12? You know what could happen if you got drunk like the time you nearly killed someone with a chair. Where is the car, Steve? You didn鈥檛 take a taxi home, did you? Now the car鈥檚 still at the pub!鈥?br> 鈥淛ust calm down, I can explain.鈥?br> 鈥楨xplain what Steve? You know what, this is just going too far, I鈥檓 going have to leave. You obviously do not know how to set an example, these are our children Steve! And if you can鈥檛 take care of them, then I will! Tomorrow morning I鈥檓 taking Caroline and Jessica and leaving this house for good.

鈥淔ine, let it be that way! You maniac!鈥?br> 鈥淢e? You鈥檙e the maniac! No, even worse, you鈥檙e an imbecile!鈥?br> 鈥淣O! Don鈥檛 have a divorce!鈥?Shouted Caroline while she jumped out from behind the sofa.

鈥淚t鈥檚 not what you think.鈥?Alice said in a calm voice.

Then max jumped out from behind the sofa and said 鈥淏ut then why did you say your taking Jess and Caroline and leaving for good?鈥?br> 鈥淟ook everyone just go to bed and in the morning Alice will take Jess and Caroline ok?鈥?Said Steve angrily.

Then Jake slowly gets up from behind the sofa and said 鈥淣o! It鈥檚 not fair soon I鈥檓 going to college and won鈥檛 be able to see you again!鈥?br> 鈥淒on鈥檛 worry Jake we鈥檒l visit you alright?鈥?br>

In the morning at 10 o鈥檆lock Alice, Jess and Caroline got up had breakfast and then had a little play but Alice looked for a house then she found a lovely house just like there鈥檚 so Alice, Jess and Caroline went to have a look at it while Max, Jake and Steve stayed home. When all the boys woke up they had breakfast Max had some Weet-Bix with sultana鈥檚 on it and milk, Jake had nutigrain and Steve had some yogurt then they started cleaning up all the girl鈥檚 room first they painted Caroline鈥檚 room white then they took her bed away and then her table and the mirror then they took all of Jesse鈥檚 stuff and they took the posters of her wall. They took her TV away and her table and bunk bed. When a big truck came they put everything in the truck and the truck drived off to give the furniture to Alice and the kids. For lunch they all had some sandwiches because no wanted a really good lunch they didn鈥檛 feel like it then Steve said 鈥渙k who wants to go get spoilt maybe go in the pool have a party just to get cheered up?鈥?br> Both boys said 鈥測eah!鈥?The next day it was their school day the school was called 鈥楴ew Life, the school was 5 minutes away it had a playground with 2 swing鈥檚 a slide a pole to slide down and that was all there was also a sandpit, there was pre-primary to high school there was a library and a swimming pool the principal was called Mrs. Marble she had a son called Mr.Marble his first name was Alex he was my teacher everyone in the class liked him because whenever your good he will give you fake money then you can buy lollies off him and whoever has the most money at the end of the year will get 2 bags of lollies. Then the school library teacher was called Mrs.Hudnker she taught the year 1 to year 2鈥檚 to read then she read stories to the year 3鈥檚 to year 7鈥檚 then she would give us worksheets and pencils. The school was very nice everyone liked it.

but one-day when the dad was resting a man called John that was going to get kicked out of the island didn鈥檛 want to get kicked out and also he wanted their money (with 鈥榯heir鈥?I mean the rich family) so he got a match stick lit it and started a fire鈥he fire got bigger and bigger by the time the fire was as big as the door John had gone to the place where firemen worked he was back with a fireman suit. He ran into the house and took Steve, Steve woke up shocked. John then took Steve to the his house Steve then shouted 鈥渨here is my kid鈥檚 go get my kids!鈥?but the man called John laughed and said 鈥渨ell only if you let me back into here,you didn鈥檛 really think I was a fireman did you? Haha鈥?Steve stared at John then said 鈥渓ook John you are band but if you save my kids then I鈥檒l let you stay. You in?鈥?鈥淒eal鈥?said John with a smirk on his face but first John took Steve to a chair and put sticky tape on Steve鈥檚 mouth and tied him onto the chair then John went to go for the kids but when John came back he said 鈥渢he kids weren鈥檛 there鈥?Steve frowned and said 鈥測our just trying to scare me get my kids right now!鈥?John smiled again 鈥渓ook pal there not there and I鈥檝e done want you wanted me to do so you better let me stay鈥?鈥淣O WAY!鈥?said Steve in a angry voice 鈥渙k then Steve we will do it the hard way鈥?John took out a knife and was just going to stab Steve when the door smashed and a log came flying in then guess who opened the door.

It was Max, Jake, Bell, Alex and Jessie and all the other kids then Max said 鈥淪AVE IT JOHN IF YOUR GOING TO HURT MY DAD YOU HAVE TO GET THROUGH ME AND EVERYONE ELSE!鈥?then all the kids got out their weapons some had baseball bats some had tennis rackets some had logs. However, Steve did not want to risk his children so Steve said, 鈥淣O kids don鈥檛! You will die please kids!鈥?but the kids did not listen then Jake said 鈥渄ad you have done everything for us like when your working and I want to play footy with you because no one else does you will just play with me and do your work later鈥?then all the kids nodded then Jessie said 鈥渟o now we are doing something for you!鈥?but John wouldn鈥檛 allow this so he pointed up they gun and loaded it, Steve was signaling to go home but this time the children obeyed.

Chapter two

The Clever, tough outgoing little rascal

Is let out.

鈥淲hat are we going to do?鈥?Asked Jessie 鈥渕y stepfather might be killed!鈥?she started panicking. 鈥淭ell the police?鈥?asked Max. 鈥淣o! If we want to save our father than if we tell the police they wont let us interfere.鈥?Said Jake frowning. Max got angry. 鈥淪hut up Jake we shouldn鈥檛 interfere!鈥?鈥淢ax, Jake is right we need to save your dad we can鈥檛 let the police do it! Anyway the police don鈥檛 know where they are, and right now I don鈥檛 either! The police are terrible anyway, this is the first time that there has been and murderous kindapper on the loose since I was born!鈥?Bell said firmly. Everyone started shouting at each other and fighting. 鈥淓VERYONE! SHUT UP!鈥?Alex roared. 鈥淲e are losing time! Fighting is not the answer! First we will try save dad then if we can鈥檛 we will tell the whole town!鈥?the other kids and teenagers started to nodd there heads. 鈥渨e need to spy on them first but we need someone small that can fit between the gates. Because John locked them once we went out.鈥?

鈥淣ow it is my time to shine!鈥?a voice came from down the dark drippy alley. 鈥淲ho was that?鈥?Jessie asked. Geuss who came into sight this time? Caroline. 鈥淐aroline!鈥?everyone shouted. 鈥淣o your to young to join with us, its not like you do karate!鈥?everyone giggled by the thought of that. 鈥淥h really?鈥?caroline showed everyone her medals for karate. She had proved them wrong. 鈥淲ow!鈥?everyone shouted. 鈥淣ow lets get to work!鈥?Caroline shouted with a smile on her face. 鈥淲ait a minute.鈥?One of the boys said. 鈥淲hy would John just let us go? Wouldn鈥檛 he think that we would tell someone?鈥?鈥淲e got to get out of here before he finds out we are here!鈥?Another boy whispered. 鈥淭o late!鈥?It was John! The kids tried to run but he caught them all. Accept from Caroline that had seen him come out and right now was saving his stepfather.

She explaned that they couldn鈥檛 tell anyone and had to save the kids. 鈥淛ohn has made a big deal out of leaving this island.鈥?Caroline whispered 鈥渄ad?鈥?caroline saw that Steve was like a statue. She heard him whisper under his breath, 鈥淎lice.鈥?Caroline was confused, 鈥渨hat about mum. Whats wrong with her?鈥?Steve stopped being like a statue and shouted with a horrified face, 鈥淎LICE! John said he is going to hurt her! He knows where she is! We need to save her!鈥?Caroline understood and at once they both ran to the hospital.

Steve ran to the counter. 鈥淥h, hi Steve lovely day today, I am sorry about your divorce. Are you here for a app-鈥?鈥渏ust be quiet! I have to see Alice! This is an emergency!鈥?鈥淚 uh, well, um,鈥?the women studdered. 鈥淲here is she!鈥?Steve screamed. 鈥淒on鈥檛 shout! The lady whispered. Why are you here?鈥?鈥淚t is an emergency please I need to see her!鈥?鈥淥k, ok, calm down I saw a man walk out with her, he said his name was John Mclay, he was taking her out for a test or something, well, that鈥檚 what he said.鈥?Steve and caroline had wide eyes. They ran out of the hospital. 鈥淲hat should we do?鈥?Caroline cried. She had tears rolling down her cheek. Same with Steve.

DING, DING, DONG. It was time for everyone in the island to go somewhere of the island. Caroline and Steve had been looking for hours asking every person they saw. No sign. Everyone left. Accept from John Alice and the kids. They were here somewhere hiding. 鈥淲hat if mum is dead and brother and sister and friends?鈥?Caroline wheeped. Steve lifted her up onto his shoulders to comfort her. But not only he comforted her he made her smile the biggest smile. The kids and Alice were in an alley hiding. 鈥淒ad! I see mum and others!鈥?whispered Caroline merrily. Steve had also seen. They ran to each other and kissed and hugged. But Alice was quick to think. 鈥淲e must get out of here! John was going to put a sleeping pill in me and drown me in water!鈥?everyone started to frown. 鈥淟ook there is the last ferry over there, we should catch it to the meeting. We are allready late! But while we are going there we need an excuse.鈥?Said Alice. They quickly hopped onto the boat. Just as it was going to leave Steve said 鈥渨ait! We can鈥檛 come back to this island, we need to go somewhere else. Lets go get the carand bring it with us so we can go somewhere. Kids stay here. Jake you look after them Alice and I will get the car.鈥?The two ran off and got into the car. Steve was starting it up and Alice had a horrified face. 鈥淪teve? Steve? STEVE?!鈥?screamed Alice. 鈥淲hat?!鈥?Said Steve rising his head. 鈥淭he chilrdren! The ferry!鈥?Screamed Alice getting out of the car. Steve quickly looked. The ferry was leaving with the children. 鈥淛ohn was the ferry driver!鈥?shouted Steve they ran to the water. Steve jumped in so he could get to them but they were allready near the end. Steve swam back. The two were shouting for help. The kids were to. John took them off the boat. He had a big metal thing that was black and a square shape. The sun was shining off it. Suddenly they both realised. It was a BOMB.

Days later there was no sign of the kids or the townspeople. Steve and Alice collected all the keys for the cars just incase they needed someextra transport. Their were two keys for each car incase one was lost. They had made a raft and they floated to the other side when the water was calm and still. The sun gazed down on them. A car was parked on the other side. Steve opened the door and tried every key. Finally he found the right one. The car was a red Holden wit some brown mud on the bottom. Alice touched the car. 鈥淚t has been here for a while the car is very hot.鈥?The sun gazed down in the lovely blue lake. Alice and Steve got into the car. He turned it around and drove around the corner. Suddenly he stopped. The meeting house had blown up. There was black ashand the the lovely house with a bell on the front and swimming pool in the front turned into big ruins. The place was terrible. Suddenly they saw a note on a tree this is what it read: Dear Mom and Dad,we know

That you would come for us so we sneaked this writing and stuck it to a wall. John said something about, a dungeon. We don鈥檛 have much time so we will just give you these sums.

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My book the kidnappe?

why did you post an entire book on the internet? It is wayyy ytoo long, and it is boring! You added extra characters in the second chapter that weren't there before like Bell and Alex. you elaborated on deatails too much, but didn't give toher needed info on characters. Also, you say Steve was Jess's stepdad in the second chapter, but her dad in the first. this book needs Majro editing!

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